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hoping for an update soon, but who is alex? 

alex is the mc's ex, if you scroll further down on the page you can read a bit more about them!

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I love Grayson a totally normal amount. The fact that he was that dedicated to finding mc just gets me. 

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I fucking love Grayson. This is absolutely amazing. The writing just sucks you in. I love it!!!

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Aaaand Im in love

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THIS IS VERRRYY GOOD. GRAYSON HAVE MY ENTIRE HEART, OMG AUTHOR!

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lots of potentia with this one <3

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Moreeee, give me more of this masterpiece ;-;


glad I stumbled on this!

Oh, just saw it’s on hiatus… 

Good luck alli ✨ 

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ahhh it's such a good story ;-;

waiting for the next update with tears...

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omggg i am SO invested. eagerly awaiting updates!!!

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Very interesting premise, really enjoying it so far. Well written too! I'm looking forward to any updates :]

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I'm so hooked to the story omg I love it!

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When I read "END OF DEMO" I was devastated, as I got really invested in the mystery. There needs to be more adult novels that allow me to choose my own path. Wonderful idea and well written where the flow and suspense wasn't lost. Looking forward for the rest.

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This is such an amazing idea and story ! I actually cried. I can't wait to see what you do with the story in the future. The characters are wonderful, especially our cat, and I love the customization of the mc. Thank you for putting your story out there and sharing it with us <3

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thank you for taking the time to read it! <3

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no THANK YOU for creating this!🖤 

I love it :) <3

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thank you!

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well, not much to say beside amazing, amazing, and effing amazing. Seriously hooked, great idea and lovable characters, please write more.Please.

hooray! another great twine tale to keep up with. godspeed.

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I LOVE GRAYSON SO MUCH QNQ IM SO EXCITED FOR WHEN MORE CHAPTERS COME OUT AHHH!! <333

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Hiiii!!! Im starting the chapter 2 (I love it with all my heart) and when you can talk with your mum, sibling and Gary, if you talk first with mum and then Gray I found a bug? glitch? idk xD (have a great day!)

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PS: In the option with the mum, "I wish how to make things better" there is not link to the next page

thank you! both of these should be fixed now <3